As an empathetic editor, my goal is to improve your work in progress and help you become a better writer. To reserve your spot in my schedule, I'll send over a contract for you to sign, along with a PayPal invoice. Take a gander at my FAQ page for all the other nitty-gritty details about my services and editing process.


Consultation (2,000 words)


First-time clients can receive a full developmental and copy edit for the first 2,000 words of their manuscript for a reduced price of $75 (this service normally costs $100 at $0.05/word). Shoot me an email from my Contact page, and I'll let you know how we can get started. This service includes:

  • Developmental comments throughout your sample

  • A one-page editorial letter assessing the opening's strengths and areas for improvement

  • Grammatical corrections and style suggestions with comments explaining these changes

  • Two thorough editing passes


Manuscript Assessment


Curious to know what readers will think of your novel? I'll provide my honest feedback, which includes a ten-page editorial letter that provides:

  • An analysis of the novel's overall strengths and weaknesses

  • Suggestions for improving the plot structure, pacing, characterization, and world-building/setting

  • An examination of the potential audience and marketability 

  • A guide to correcting the general patterns of grammatical and stylistic errors within the manuscript


Developmental Edit


A developmental edit provides solution-oriented, big-picture feedback, including:

  • Developmental comments within your manuscript

  • Light line edits (this is not a substitute for copy editing)

  • Chapter-by-chapter revision list identifying potential problems and solutions

  • Fifteen-page editorial letter assessing the novel's strengths/weaknesses, plot, pacing, characterization, themes, audience, marketability, and general patterns of grammar/style errors


Short Story Critique


With my love for writing and reading short stories, I would be excited to help you revise your short fiction into a shining gem. My short story critique is a comprehensive service that includes:

  • Developmental comments throughout the short story

  • A one-page editorial letter assessing the story's strengths and areas for improvement

  • Grammatical corrections and style suggestions with comments explaining these changes

  • Two thorough editing passes


"Write Your Damn Novel" Private Coaching


If you’ve always wanted to write a novel but you haven’t gotten around to finishing one yet, this is a private coaching package designed for you. In four sessions (one per week) via Skype or email, I will work with you to flesh out all those ideas in your head and pave a clear path forward. Here’s how it works:


  • For each round, I will present a numbered list of questions about your story idea.

  • Once you answer them, I will provide feedback and follow-up questions.

  • Once we confirm the path forward, we move on to the next round and repeat.

  • After all four rounds, I will give you an organized document of what we’ve discussed, including a tentative plot outline, character notes, and a writing schedule to help you complete your first draft within a year.


I want to spark or reignite your passion for your work in progress. Writing a novel is hard work, and sometimes we need a voice of encouragement and a sense of direction to help us finish what we start. I will be your sounding board, your brainstorming partner, your biggest fan—the person who cares as much about your story as you do.